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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Flash {talk} 00:56, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'll be conducting this review. Check out Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for my approach to GA reviews. Let's get this started. :) The Flash {talk} 00:56, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Might want to change "Winchester was created by[...]" to "John was[...]" as the rest of the article refers to him by his first name—plus there are other character's with that last time mentioned in the article as well.
Done. Ωphois 01:27, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "[...]Sam and Dean trying to find their missing father." -> "[...]find him."
Done. Ωphois 01:27, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Plot

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  • All good here—nice. :)

Characterization

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  • There's no book ref above Refs to explain what "Knight, p. whatever" is. Please add it.
Done. Ωphois 02:33, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wikilink to Morgran and delink in "Development."
Done. Ωphois 01:27, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Following the death of his wife, Sam and Dean[...]" -> "[...]the death of their mother[...]" or "[...]the death of their mother,John's wife,[...]"
Done. Ωphois 01:27, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Bad Day at the Rock" is an episode, right? Please use cite episode for its ref, then.
Done. Ωphois 01:27, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Development

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  • Can you add an image of Morgan?
Done. Ωphois 02:33, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Done. Ωphois 01:27, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
  • Wikilink to the fifth season.
Done. Ωphois 01:27, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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Done. Ωphois 01:27, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Images

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  • Pretty okay rationale for the sole image (it's a little weak, but it'll work).
  • Same as I mentioned above—can you add an image of Morgan?
Done. Ωphois 02:33, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Actually, I found out that the image is by MTV, and the Flickr user appears to be claiming it as his own. The only free image I can find is this bad one. Ωphois 02:41, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
That could work—you can always try the headshot, though (it's not that similar to the infobox image) The Flash {talk} 02:49, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Final say

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    Ref 20 is a bare ref—please fix it.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Just needs that bare ref fixed before I can pass it. The Flash {talk} 02:41, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I fixed the ref, but moved the statement connected to it to the development section. Ωphois 02:58, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, nice job. I've gone ahead and passed the article. Cheers, The Flash {talk} 03:05, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks! :) Ωphois 03:12, 30 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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