Talk:John Winchester (Supernatural)/GA1
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Reviewer: The Flash {talk} 00:56, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
Hi, I'll be conducting this review. Check out Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for my approach to GA reviews. Let's get this started. :) The Flash {talk} 00:56, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- Might want to change "Winchester was created by[...]" to "John was[...]" as the rest of the article refers to him by his first name—plus there are other character's with that last time mentioned in the article as well.
- "[...]Sam and Dean trying to find their missing father." -> "[...]find him."
Plot
[edit]- All good here—nice. :)
Characterization
[edit]- There's no book ref above Refs to explain what "Knight, p. whatever" is. Please add it.
- Wikilink to Morgran and delink in "Development."
- "Following the death of his wife, Sam and Dean[...]" -> "[...]the death of their mother[...]" or "[...]the death of their mother,John's wife,[...]"
- "Bad Day at the Rock" is an episode, right? Please use cite episode for its ref, then.
Development
[edit]- Can you add an image of Morgan?
- In Ref 30, wikilnk to Zap2it.
- Wikilink to the fifth season.
Reception
[edit]Images
[edit]- Pretty okay rationale for the sole image (it's a little weak, but it'll work).
- Same as I mentioned above—can you add an image of Morgan?
- Done. Ωphois 02:33, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- Actually, I found out that the image is by MTV, and the Flickr user appears to be claiming it as his own. The only free image I can find is this bad one. Ωphois 02:41, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- That could work—you can always try the headshot, though (it's not that similar to the infobox image) The Flash {talk} 02:49, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- Actually, I found out that the image is by MTV, and the Flickr user appears to be claiming it as his own. The only free image I can find is this bad one. Ωphois 02:41, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- Done. Ωphois 02:33, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
Final say
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
Ref 20 is a bare ref—please fix it.
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Just needs that bare ref fixed before I can pass it. The Flash {talk} 02:41, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- I fixed the ref, but moved the statement connected to it to the development section. Ωphois 02:58, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- Alright, nice job. I've gone ahead and passed the article. Cheers, The Flash {talk} 03:05, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks! :) Ωphois 03:12, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- Alright, nice job. I've gone ahead and passed the article. Cheers, The Flash {talk} 03:05, 30 December 2009 (UTC)
- I fixed the ref, but moved the statement connected to it to the development section. Ωphois 02:58, 30 December 2009 (UTC)