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GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 21:05, 6 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox

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 Done

Lead

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  • with Colceru also being responsible for the mixing → too much detail
  • Akcent recruited Romanian singer Nico to perform the track with them for it. → Akcent asked Romanian singer Nico to perform the track with them for the competition.
  • Mihai Trăistariu's "Tornerò", → release date between brackets
  • "Jokero" was received positively by reviewers → "Jokero" was received positively by most music critics + link music critics to music journalism
  • Romania and further reached → Romania and it reached
  • Two music videos were directed for the track → Two music videos were shot for the track
  • one by Dragos Buliga → The first, directed by Dragos Buliga
  • disco ball and the other one, whose purpose was to promote → disco ball. The second was recorded to promote
  • Selecția Națională, features → Selecția Națională, it features

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Background and release

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  • vocalist named Georgiana provides uncredited vocals on it → it is uncredited and appears on the liner notes?
    So that's different! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:26, 8 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • A club track,[4] it is sung in both English and Spanish.[5] → The club track is sung in English and Spanish.[4][5]
  • Roton,[6][7][8] and in other territories on 5 July 2006 by Music Company Nordic. → Roton.[6][7][8] It was issued in other territories on 5 July 2006 by Music Company Nordic.

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Selecția Națională 2006

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  • due to receiving the most votes → as it received most of the votes
  • having over 30% of the votes → remove
  • and was given the fifth spot in the final to perform in → and it was the fifth song performed in the final
  • Song Contest due to their performance as they are → Song Contest as they are
  • Mihai Trăistariu's "Tornerò" → date of release in between brackets

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Reception

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  • Add "Jokero" was received positively by most music critics + link music critics to music journalism

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Promotion

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  • Two music videos were shot for the song → first sentence
  • The first music video for the song was directed → The first was directed
  • "Jokero" was first performed in Istanbul → second paragraph
  • As part of "Romania's Day" → when?
  • On the last night of their Finnish tour → when?
  • an event hosted by Polish radio station Radio Eska in 2007 → more specific date?
    Month? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 13:26, 8 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Make sure these performances are ordered by chronogical order

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Track listing

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  • Each release, either digital or physical has to displayed propraly, they can't be summarised, use two collumns.
  • Use spaced en dash,  –

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Personnel

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  • Use spaced en dash,  –

Weekly charts

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  • Fine

Year-end charts

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  • Fine

Release and radio history

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  • Fine

See also

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  • Remove it

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Notes

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  • See above

References

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  • Sourcecheck: 1, 2, 4, 5, 15, 20, 29 and 30.

Overall

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