Talk:Jordan Williams (linebacker, born 1993)/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
Will look at this article. Comments will be coming soon. MWright96 (talk) 20:52, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
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Lead
[edit]- "Williams played in 44 games, starting 21," - Williams played in 44 games, of which he started 21,
Done
- Wikilink sacks to Quarterback sack
Done
- Do the same to practice squad
Done
Early years
[edit]- Fix the redirect links to middle linebacker to Linebacker#Middle linebacker and nose tackle to Defensive tackle#Nose tackle
Done
- "His junior year," - During his junior year,
Done
- "His senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end" - this piece of text should read as In Williams' senior season in 2010, he played at defensive end
Done
- "He committed to Tennessee in October 2010." - spell this out a bit more: He committed to play college football for Tennessee in October 2010.
Done
College career
[edit]- Add the appropriate wikilinks to sacks and pass breakups
Done
- "He appeared in ten games, with five starts," - reword to Williams appeared in ten games, of which he started in half of them,
Done
- "Williams played in 44 games, starting 21, during his college career." - Throughout his college career, Williams played in 44 games and started 21 of them.
Done
New York Jets
[edit]- "He was released by the Jets on September 5 and signed to the team's practice squad on September 6, 2015." - change the text highlighted in bold so it reads the following day
Done
Miami Dolphins
[edit]- "He was released by the Dolphins on December 26 and signed to the team's practice squad 'on December 29, 2015." - three days later
Done
- "He was released by the team on September 3 and signed to the Dolphins' practice squad on September 4, 2016." - the next day
Done
Personal life
[edit]- "Jordan's sister, Janine" - please don't use Jordan
Done
- "Jordan held the first annual Jordan Williams Skills Camp on July 14, 2016." - same issue as above
Done
That's everything I could find in my reading of this article. On hold until all the queries have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 07:18, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
- Done. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:49, 22 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Okay then. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 23 November 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:58, 23 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Okay then. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:56, 23 November 2017 (UTC)