Talk:Judah Leib Ben-Ze'ev/GA1
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Reviewer: Whiteguru (talk · contribs) 06:14, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
Starts GA Review; the review will follow the same sections of the Article. Hopefully we will start anon. --Whiteguru (talk) 06:14, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
Observations
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- Please see MOS:REPEATLINK. There are a number of duplicate links and irrelevant links.
- knowledge of Hebrew philology = over linking. We don't need links to Hebrew (nor philology) here, it is already stated he is a scholar revitalising the usage of Hebrew as a written language.
- In 1787 he moved to Berlin, then the centre of the Haskalah movement. Over linking. We don't need a link to Berlin. Haskalah is already linked in the infobox.
- became friends with the Me'assefim and → already linked in the lede
- links to Syriac and Greek are superfluous
- in Vienna as proofreader in the Hebrew presses → Vienna, proofreader, presses do not need links.
- German revision of his Talmud by Salomon Jacob Cohen appeared in Berlin → Berlin does not need a link. Nor does Vilnius.
- was translated into Italian by Leon Romani → Italian is a common word, does not need a link; ditto Russian in the same sentence.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- and received a traditional religious education. This sentence links to Jewish education. The text should say this. Simply 'religious education' is misleading.
- Good work on references.
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- Appropriate coverage of Ze'ev's contrbutions to Me'assefim and his role in the Haskalah revival of the Hebrew language.
- Linking to Graf-Wellhausen is excellent, as it places Ze'ev most properly as a Hebrew critic using Historical criticism.
- Jewish Virtual Library says that he was basically a failure as a poet?
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Yes, NPOV is presented.
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Article created on 90 November 2020;
- 42 edits from 3 editors;
- 168 page views last 90 days.
- No edit wars, article is considered stable.
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Judah Leib Ben-Ze'ev.png = in the public domain in its country of origin;
- Ben Zeev Talmud.JPG = is in the public domain in its country of origin
- Overall:
- This is a good article, not over-written, sharp and concise.
- There are excessive links in the article; when these are corrected (and the education reference) the article would achieve Good Article status. --Whiteguru (talk) 08:04, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Whiteguru: Thanks for the review! I've gone ahead and implemented the recommended changes. –Kyuko (talk) 14:48, 11 May 2021 (UTC)
- @Kyuko: Thank you for your corrections. Article passed! --Whiteguru (talk) 22:20, 11 May 2021 (UTC)