Talk:Kauai Plantation Railway/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 01:44, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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This is a relatively short article. As such, I don't have many issues with this article. Just a couple of things:

• Does this heritage railway have a station stop or something? Perhaps a mention of that would suffice, plus an image of the stop.

  There is a station, but I can't find any real coverage of it. You can actually see part of it in the photo in the infobox. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

• Perhaps more details like tourist numbers? Reception of the heritage railway?

  I didn't find anything on passenger numbers, but I did find a bit of information that it was received positively by local residents, and I've added this to the article. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

• Wish the lead could be fluffed up more, but given this is a short article, the lead seems fine.

  I've expanded the lead. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

• Any other notable incidents during its operations?

  I searched for anything on accidents, but I didn't find anything. Seems they've been running a safe railroad. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

That's all for now.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:44, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, @ZKang123: I think I've responded to everything know. Let me know if you have any further comments. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 17:47, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

No other outstanding problems I can find for this article. Issues raised are satisfactorily explained or addressed.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:18, 16 November 2022 (UTC)