Talk:Kenneth Stewart (RNZAF officer)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:36, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:36, 24 January 2023 (UTC)

• Images appropriately licensed
• Is his service number actually useful for a reader?

• I've been pinged by other reviewers for not having it. I could remove it from the article body and just cite it in the infobox but I prefer to discuss everything mentioned in the infobox in the text. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

• link radar

• Done, both in lead and main body. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

• In the early life section I think that we can dispense with his middle name.

• Done. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

• Shouldn't Wigram air base be RNZAF Wigram

• Rephrase. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

• RAF aircraft mark numbers don't use a full stop

• Removed. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

• Shortly after the move, on 7 April, Stewart and Brumby achieved more success; ground radar alerted them to a German aircraft in their patrol sector over the Ruhr awkward

• I have rephrased this. Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

• Short and sweet--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:23, 27 January 2023 (UTC)

• Thanks Sturm, this is ready for you to have another look. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 10:34, 27 January 2023 (UTC)