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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:50, 11 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • Non-free use rationale looks good.
  • "It starred" → "It stars" (MOS:TENSE)
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "written by Rakesh Roshan, who wrote" sounds weird. maybe "conceived by"?
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "49th Filmfare Awards".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:03, 16 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot and cast[edit]

  • The plot section is 550 words so it passes WP:FILMPLOT.
  • "paralyse" → "paralyze" (consistency)
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:02, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "one of their group behind" → "a group member behind" or "a member of their group behind"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:02, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • That's everything I could find in the plot section. #Cast looks good as well.

Production and soundtrack[edit]

  • "Zinta was given with the role" → "Zinta was given the role"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Rakesh Roshan recommended her to play" → "Rakesh Roshan recommended she play"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "finished writing of the film's screenplay" → "finished writing the film's screenplay"
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Couldn't find any major issues in #Soundtrack.

Release and reception[edit]

  • Marketing and release can be their own section.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • You can also move #Box_office over #Critical_response.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • #Accolades is short enough to also become a subsection.
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Legacy and sequel[edit]

  • Section title: Sequel → Sequels
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

  • All archivable sources are archived.
  • Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subscription".
Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:18, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress[edit]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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