Talk:Lately (EP)/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:43, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- where they recorded four original numbers → "tracks" sounds better here
Done
Infobox
[edit]- flawless ;)
Development and legacy
[edit]- of the finish products → of the finished products
Done
- which was well received → which was well-received
Done
- throughout early 1994, at The Place → no comma here
Done
- "Can't Even Fake It"; Ted Jensen, who mastered the recordings at Sterling Sound Studios in New York City; and Jean-Pierre Sluys, who served as an assistant mixer to both Chase and Schlesinger. → all semicolons to normal commas
Not done – I wrote it per MOS:COMMASPLICE where semicolons are used used to separate items in the sentence that already include commas. Carbrera (talk) 01:00, 28 December 2016 (UTC)
- Wonderfully Nothing (2003), with his band Brookville → no comma
Done
Composition and promotion
[edit]- Doing so, the lyrics (particularly any adjectives used) were summarized → Doing so, the lyrics—particularly any adjectives used—were summarized
Done
Critical reception
[edit]- flawless ;)
Track listing
[edit]- flawless ;)
Personnel
[edit]- Adapted from Lately liner notes. → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Lately
Done
Release history
[edit]- Unlink formats and labels, please
Done
Other stuff
[edit]Copy-violation
[edit]- 11.5% is super!
Links
[edit]References
[edit]- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article!
- No dead links! Good job!
Outcome
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On hold for 7 days!
- @Cartoon network freak: – Thanks so much for the review! You're doing so well with the GA Cup! Regards, Carbrera (talk) 01:00, 28 December 2016 (UTC).
- Thanks! Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 06:44, 28 December 2016 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: – Thanks so much for the review! You're doing so well with the GA Cup! Regards, Carbrera (talk) 01:00, 28 December 2016 (UTC).
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.