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Reviewer: --Legolas (talk2me) 04:27, 30 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi all. I will be reviewing this article against the GA criterias.

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

OK first of all, rest aside, my main issue with this article is that its incomplete. The lead states that it is the third single, which the infobox contradicts. There is no info regarding the song composition, the credits. There is WP:MOS issues in the language. The part about the background is WP:OR. I have the iTunes booklet and nowhere it says all of that. I can't give more than two days for concerned editors to rectify these, so that normal review can start. --Legolas (talk2me) 11:39, 30 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed lead. There is no information readily available about composition although there are hints in the critical reception section. However I don't understand why you labeled the background original research as the infobox plainly states the producers and where producing, recording and mixing took place. Candyo32 (talk) 20:14, 30 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Since reviews have already hinted at what kinda song "Love Me" is, you can easily have an essence of what should be the composition of this song. Before working with Bieber, DJ Frank E had recently produced songs such as Flo Rida & Kesha's "Right Round" and was also working on Madonna & Lil Wayne's "Revolver". + The song was the only song from My World to have no recording or production to take place in Georgia, the base of Bieber's career. — These lines are clearly WP:OR as it is not supported in the source, ie the iTunes booklet. Also it is WP:UNDUE as to what he has worked on previously, to be included. --Legolas (talk2me) 06:56, 3 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't know if I should work on a light composition section, since I would assume it could be only little info pulled from the critical reception, so I just made added composition in the header, I don't know if that is acceptable or not. Removed OR. Candyo32 (talk)
Then again, if you must add it in the lead, you have to source it. No need of a separate composition section them. Be sure that the genres in the infobox also get mentioned, else they will be WP:OR as well. --Legolas (talk2me) 06:26, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I've made fixes, assuming that comments in the reception can be used to identify genre. Candyo32 (talk) 23:34, 4 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Then again, why did you remove the two lines about the composition from the lead? You can just source it and it can stay. Also, use en-dash in teh credits section. --Legolas (talk2me) 06:13, 5 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I didn't think the lead sentences were necessarily supported later in the article by refs. And can you restate what you mean by the credits? Candyo32 (talk) 01:37, 6 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK. For the credits you have to use an en-dash ie "–" in between the names and the credits, instead of a normal - --Legolas (talk2me) 04:31, 6 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, fixed. Candyo32 (talk) 23:36, 6 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Good job, I am gonna pass this article now. Congratulations. --Legolas (talk2me) 03:46, 7 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks!! Only one more article to try to GA and I can try to fix up My World as a good topic!!! :) Candyo32 (talk) 03:54, 7 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Oh & that was my 10th GA :D Candyo32 (talk) 03:59, 7 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Should we include his video for love me? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6FyW8J48As4 Crazychrisr92 (talk) 20:14, 2 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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