Talk:Lynching of Garrett Thompson
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The article is well written and has clear and descriptive material. I would recommend possibly putting a citation for the lynching section of the article to cite where you got all of that information. Also, maybe adding a picture and a few more links would help make the article stronger. The article seems neutral and the citations look correct. The article has a good layout and flows in a way that a reader can follow it clearly. Asudman (talk) 16:01, 29 February 2024 (UTC)
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Similar to the other response, I think some citation on the lynching section would be effective. A lot of the sentences could flow better together; "Garrett Thompson's arrest attracted a large crowd. He was placed in the front room of the prison by the sheriff. While a man named Colonel Anderson cross questioned him." could be a single sentence rather than 3 individual ones, for example. Artleyk (talk) 19:01, 1 March 2024 (UTC)