Talk:MacGyver (2016 TV series) season 4/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:59, 1 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good, but remove the hidden note in the "|num_episodes" parameter.
The use of "The series" in the second paragraph sounds repetitive. Maybe change "The series stars" to "It stars".
Additionally, combine the first two paragraphs, as they seem short when separated.

Cast and characters

Is there a reason why some characters have descriptions, and others don't?

Episodes

Is there a reason why some characters have the name of the actors who portray them next to their names, and others don't? (I would remove them).
"Aubrey, Mac and Desi" → "Aubrey, Mac, and Desi"
"Mac to join her, but fails" → "Mac to join her but fails"
"super weapon" → "superweapon"

Production

Development

"claimed were not true" → "claimed was not true"
"CBS later decided" → "As a result, CBS later decided"

Casting

Put James Murray, Sal Vulcano, Joe Gatto, and Brian Quinn in parathesis as the sentence structure makes it seem as if The Tenderloins and the group were different people.
Additionally, could you replace the reference after their names with something that's not a press release, such as this article from Meaww?
Same thing for the reference for Tate Donovan and Peter Weller. Maybe change it with this and this, since press releases really don't count as "secondary sources".

Viewing figures

6.192 rounds to 6.19, not 6.20. Please change this in this section and #Episodes.
"7.04" → "7.05" per this reference.
For only episode 8, change "1.34" to "1.35" per this reference.

References

Link Mitch Metcalf in each citation using his name.
Try linking each website to their Wiki-articles.
Since it's only a part of the citation, the "Updated: ShowBuzzDaily's" part of the first 13 references can be capitalized per MOS:ALLCAPS.

Overview

GAN table

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Notes

@TheTVExpert: I have added most, if not all of my comments. This article is well-written, but has some issues to address. Please add comments, and ping me back when you have done so. Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 23:59, 1 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. TheTVExpert (talk) 15:24, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@TheTVExpert: I think you forgot to change "Aubrey, Mac and Desi" to "Aubrey, Mac, and Desi" and all uses of "super weapon" to "superweapon" in #Episodes. Once you do that, ping me again, and I will promote this article. Additionally, there's one reference (currently #20) with the website parameter as just "Deadline", so change that to "Deadline Hollywood". Some Dude From North Carolina^{wanna talk?} 15:36, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. TheTVExpert (talk) 16:29, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]