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GA Review

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Reviewer: CrowzRSA 22:30, 5 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Released by Warner Music Video on November 13, 1985, — shouldn't it be through, not by
    • Works fine.
  • it contains a concert date from The Virgin Tour, filmed at Cobo Arena in Detroit, Michigan on May 25, 1985. — It doesn't ACTUALLY contain a date, so shouldn't it be contains footage from a concert date or something.
    • Reworded.
  • Madonna got busy with the recordingbusy doesn't sound like the best word here, perhaps something like Madonna started recording.
    • Correct.
  • The performance of "Angel", — performance should be plural
    • Oops.
  • performance was not strong in them. — strong? consider rewording.
    • Reworded.
  • was certified gold — i'm pretty sure there should be an a after certified.
    • I'm afraid not, its always written as "certified [gold/platinum/diamond/silver]".
I'll review some more tomorrow. CrowzRSA 22:48, 5 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for reviewing the article CrowzRSA. — Legolas (talk2me) 03:45, 6 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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  • Madonna got busy with the recording of her third studio albumbusy doesn't sound like the best word here, perhaps something like Madonna started recording.
  • Add link to Director (Film director)
  • and shooting for the film Shanghai Surprise — Add what genre the video is (it's a comedy film)
  • It portrayed Madonna in her first image makeover, with platinum blond curls, and conservative wardrobe. — things like makeover and wardrobe should be linked.
  • The performance of "Angel", — performance should be plural
  • performance was not strong in them. — strong? consider rewording.
  • Add link to music video

Reception

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No problems here.

Track listing

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  • It was released on VHS and later on Laserdisc, to this date no DVD release has been announced. It was also released as part of a three VHS box set The Madonna Collection in 2000. — Is there a ref for this?

References

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  • Ref 1 doesn't support the first two sentences of the "Background" section/
  • Removed.
  • Ref 3 doesn't support that it was recorded in Cobo Arena in Detroit, Michigan on May 25, 1985.
  • The album opening credits were its source

Result

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  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
CrowzRSA 22:36, 19 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]