Talk:Mansur ibn Lu'lu'/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 01:35, 28 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:35, 28 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

No DABs, external links OK
Move the Duchy of Antioch article to the Bibliography and add the full range of pages to the entry.
Add the full range of pages for the Basil II article in the Bibliography
Standardize spelling of Brill
Add ISBN for Amabe's book.
One duplicate link
What's a ratel?
Probably best to delete mention of the robes.
Link dinar
On 7 January 1016, Fath recognized Salih's rule, an act which took Mansur by surprise; Mansur believed that Fath handed over the citadel to Salih and fled Aleppo that night with his sons, brothers and a few of his ghilmān. This doesn't make sense to me. The first half of the sentence doesn't lead properly into the rest.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:16, 3 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Sturmvogel 66: Thanks for taking the time to review this. All your points have now been addressed—sorry for the delay. --Al Ameer (talk) 21:25, 22 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]