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GA Review

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Hello. I'll be doing the Good Article review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement:

  • The quotes all need to be sourced.
Partially fixed. diego_pmc (talk)
Now totally fixed. (Impy4ever (talk) 09:58, 18 June 2008 (UTC))[reply]
  • The image in the infobox is marked as low resolution, but it is not.
Fixed. diego_pmc (talk)
  • can't --> cannot - spell out all contractions
Fixed. diego_pmc (talk)
  • Can nothing else be said about the casting of the other minor roles?
Don't think so. Nothing that would be related to the movie in any case. diego_pmc (talk)
  • Where did the new funds come from?
We didn't manage to solve this one – press releases don't mention it. (Impy4ever (talk) 10:12, 18 June 2008 (UTC))[reply]
  • "However, the production benefited from its picturesque view" - source?
Fixed. (Impy4ever (talk) 10:12, 18 June 2008 (UTC))[reply]
  • Is the first paragraph under public reception supposed to be italicized? It isn't a quote.
Fixed. diego_pmc (talk)

That's it. The article will be on hold for a week for improvements. Nikki311 00:57, 13 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

One more thing...per WP:EL, the youtube trailer link needs to be removed from the external links. Also, the interview that is mentioned in the references, should also be removed, and the other interview would be more appropriate in a further reading section. Nikki311 21:26, 19 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Actually this wasn't a big fix, so I just went ahead and did it myself. Great work. I'll pass the article. Nikki311 21:29, 19 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]