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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:42, 27 May 2016 (UTC)
Hello! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review to your GAN:
- Lead
- a song by -> a song recorded by
- from his -> for his
- the song is the album's -> the track serves as the record's
- song, with -> song featuring
- The song focuses -> The recording focuses
- marriage, and -> marriage and
- critiqued -> criticized
- has sold 2.2 million copies so far. -> and has since sold 2.2 million copies there
- becoming a top 5 song in New Zealand -> the top five in New Zealand
- Glee. Their -> Glee; their
- out peaked -> outperformed
- Composition
- wedding bells, -> remove comma
- and features a -> and a
- and he has been described to "woo" throughout it. -> Try to use different grammar.
- and being -> with it being
- "bubbly", and -> bubbly" and a
- Lyrically, the love song -> A love song, it lyrically
- impulses", and -> remove comma
- song to the 60's -> song to 60's
- girl-groups -> girl groups
- groups, the -> groups and to the
- Critical reception
- stars, and labeled -> stars, with him labeling
- that its sound -> that the recording's sound
- production to be -> remove "to be"
- Combine the two paragraphs
- of Allmusic, praised -> Remove comma
- found the -> founding the
- thought that the song -> confessed that the recording
- noted a lack of -> noted its lack of
- where "fuck" -> where the word "fuck"
- Chart performance
- Try to differ grammar (song, song...)
- copies and has -> copies there and has
- US. It debuted -> United States, thus debuting
- Live performance and covers
- on the singles chart of Australia -> in Australia
- Credits and personnel
- On "Talking to the Moon", I have changed the style a minor bit. It would look better if you would implement it also here; however, you don't have to
- I like it better, the way you did it on Talking to The Moon artcile. I have seen quite a couple of this around and that is the one that strikes me the most. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
- Charts
- Make sure the charts are listed in alphabetical order (Germany...)
Oops, my bad. Once in a lifetime. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
- Certifications
- For United States set a {{N/A|None}} at "certification
- Release
- Unlink labels and CD single both in "Process" and "History"
Outcome: This article features mostly minor issues, thus I'm giving you 7 days to fix them by placing it on hold. Ping me when you're ready. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:34, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
@Cartoon network freak:. Every issue you raised has been addressed, as always give it a second look. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
- Outcome: Passing this article! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:52, 28 May 2016 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.