Talk:Marry You/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:42, 27 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I'm Cartoon network freak and here's my review to your GAN:

Lead

a song by -> a song recorded by
from his -> for his
the song is the album's -> the track serves as the record's
song, with -> song featuring
The song focuses -> The recording focuses
marriage, and -> marriage and
critiqued -> criticized
has sold 2.2 million copies so far. -> and has since sold 2.2 million copies there
becoming a top 5 song in New Zealand -> the top five in New Zealand
Glee. Their -> Glee; their
out peaked -> outperformed

Composition

wedding bells, -> remove comma
and features a -> and a
and he has been described to "woo" throughout it. -> Try to use different grammar.
and being -> with it being
"bubbly", and -> bubbly" and a
Lyrically, the love song -> A love song, it lyrically
impulses", and -> remove comma
song to the 60's -> song to 60's
girl-groups -> girl groups
groups, the -> groups and to the

Critical reception

stars, and labeled -> stars, with him labeling
that its sound -> that the recording's sound
production to be -> remove "to be"
Combine the two paragraphs
of Allmusic, praised -> Remove comma
found the -> founding the
thought that the song -> confessed that the recording
noted a lack of -> noted its lack of
where "fuck" -> where the word "fuck"

Chart performance

Try to differ grammar (song, song...)
copies and has -> copies there and has
US. It debuted -> United States, thus debuting

Live performance and covers

on the singles chart of Australia -> in Australia

Credits and personnel

On "Talking to the Moon", I have changed the style a minor bit. It would look better if you would implement it also here; however, you don't have to

I like it better, the way you did it on Talking to The Moon artcile. I have seen quite a couple of this around and that is the one that strikes me the most. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Charts

Make sure the charts are listed in alphabetical order (Germany...)

Oops, my bad. Once in a lifetime. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Certifications

For United States set a {{N/A|None}} at "certification

Release

Unlink labels and CD single both in "Process" and "History"

Outcome: This article features mostly minor issues, thus I'm giving you 7 days to fix them by placing it on hold. Ping me when you're ready. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:34, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

~~@Cartoon network freak:. Every issue you raised has been addressed, as always give it a second look. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:50, 28 May 2016 (UTC)~~[reply]

Outcome: Passing this article! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:52, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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