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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:07, 29 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


General
  • No copyvio/dablink issues
  • 1 deadlink [1]
    • Fixed
Lead
  • It is "practise" not "practice"
    • Done
  • No citations needed in lead unless you say something controversial
    • Removed citations from the lead to main body with some text
Background
  • Khasiis are an ancient tribe "Khasi"
    • Yes, done
Rights, roles and responsibilities
  • The birth of a girls is celebrated while the birth of a son is accepted "girl". I think you should say "simply accepted" to emphasise the point
    • Done
  • They enjoy total security, unlike the rest of the country Sure these are the words of the source? And say "in the rest"
    • Done
  • A successful career women of this society Meaning?
    • Clarified
  • matrilocal and duolocal Meaning?
    • Wiki link for "matrilocal" and explanation for "duolocal" provided
  • The youngest daughter of this society, the Ka Khadduh, inherits the ancestral property Repeated earlier in the section. Mention this there
    • Done
  • (3,000 members[5]) Place the ref outside the bracket
    • Shifted
  • equal rights discrimination against men Error? This part has no clear meaning
    • Corrected
  • In a Meghalaya Legislative Assembly of 60 members, there are only four women Mention the year this data pertains to

Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:51, 30 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]