Talk:Mike Kullman/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 01:08, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Notes

• added philly and coach cat
• "After being released" i dont think high schoolers get "released"
• "third release" i wonder if theres another word we could use
  • Changed both to "cut"; sounds better to me; though I could try changing it to something else if you'd like.
• "first-team All-Pennsylvania State Athletic Conference." "second-team selection the following year" Add to infobox
  • Added.
• should we link minicamp
  • Linked.
• I think we can link retainer to Retainer agreement?
  • Linked.
• "the game, and Kullman" remove comma
  • Removed.
• "and made nine tackles" remove made
  • Removed.
• hes not actually german is he? Was he just born there? There is a german cat
  • Not really sure - there wasn't really much talking about that - what would you suggest?

That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:16, 25 October 2023 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:38, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 06:31, 30 October 2023 (UTC) @BeanieFan11: Where'd you get his height of 6'2 from? NFL, PFR and PFA all say 6'1. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 13:58, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: I don't know, but I changed it back to 6'1. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:56, 30 October 2023 (UTC)