Talk:Mindful (song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 09:00, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Lead

• You don't need to link "studio album"

• Unlinked. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• It revolves → It lyrically revolves

• Revised in a slightly different way. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• and her album release party → and at her album release party

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

• Less Issues Than Vogue here ;)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Release and composition

• Eric Dawkins, Eric Cire → Eric Dawkins and Eric Cire

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• You should mention the label for its promotional release

• Added. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• Again, don't link "studio album"

• Unlinked. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• the first song on the album → the record's opener

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• The instrumental is provided by a "funky guitar line" → The song contains a "funky guitar line" in its instrumentation

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• Delenda Joseph of Uproxx → start a new sentence here without a semicolon (;)

• Removed. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• Link "hip-hop"

• Linked. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Critical reception

• No issues here ;)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Music video and promotion

• for "Mindful" was released on March 10, 2017 through → replace "through" with "on"

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• More Issues Than Vogue; the other three are → More Issues Than Vogue along with

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Track listing

• Flawless ;)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

• Flawless ;)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Release history

• Flawless ;)

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 9.1% is very good!

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

• Thank you! Aoba47 (talk) 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Outcome

• Wow, this article was nearly flawless... Congrats on all your work! I put this  On hold for 7 days to allow your edits. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:57, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• @Cartoon network freak: Thank you for all of the help! I believe that I have addressed all of your comments. Hope you are having a wonderful new year so far! 16:03, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• @Aoba47: Gladly passing! I don't want to sound odd, but maybe you have time for one of my GANs? Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 16:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.