Talk:Mohabbatein/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:22, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:22, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
Infobox, Lead
[edit]- The reference for the budget (infobox) has the wrong title.
- This says the budget was ₹190 million, so recite it and change the budget everywhere to ₹120–190 million
- "second-highest grossing" → "second-highest-grossing"
- Add commas after Shah Rukh Khan, Jimmy Shergill, and "Academy Awards".
Plot, Cast
[edit]- In the last paragraph, add commas after "Sameer, Vicky" and "Sanjana, Ishika".
- Other than that, the plot passes WP:FILMPLOT and the cast looks good.
Production
[edit]- "highest grossing" → "highest-grossing"
- "change his mind" → "changed his mind"
- "made another" → "make another"
- "a honest" → "an honest"
- "role as Megha" → "role of Megha"
- "tree male" → "three male"
- "specially" → "specifically"
- Wikilink Screen.
- Recite references at the end of each quote.
- Change uses of "..." (here and in other sections) to "[...]"
Music
[edit]- Add a comma after Shah Rukh Khan.
- Other than that, this section looks good.
Release, Critical reception
[edit]- No issues here.
Accolades
[edit]- Table looks good.
References, External links
[edit]- Mark references from The Hindu with "|url-access=subcription".
- Add "/reviews" to the Rotten Tomatoes link per Template talk:Rotten Tomatoes.
Progress
[edit]GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not) |
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