Talk:Monster (Kanye West song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Jennie--x (talk · contribs) 21:31, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
Initial Comments[edit]
- Lead
- The lead is four paragraphs long which is the maximum for an article of any size. This article isn't particularly long; could this be merged and edited to comply with WP:LEAD? Three paragraphs would probably be sufficient enough
Done
- Background
Done
- Composition
- "In his deepest, most intimidating voice" sounds very journalistic and certainly isn't encyclopedic, this needs changing.
- Reception
Done
- Music video
Done
- Charts and Release History
Done
- References
Done
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Fixed the lead, and removed the questionable sentence. Bruce Campbell (talk) 21:14, 4 September 2012 (UTC)