Talk:Montrose Center/GA1
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Reviewer: Sportsguy17 (talk · contribs) 14:42, 6 September 2017 (UTC)
Hello, I'm happy to review this article for you. Sorry about the long wait, as you can probably guess, GAN is seriously bogged down right now (albeit no one should have to wait this long for a review). I'll get to closely reading and reviewing the article shortly. Sportsguy17 (T • C) 14:42, 6 September 2017 (UTC)
@Kmwebber: I took a good read through the article and to be brutally honest, a lot of work needs to be done for it to get to GA status. My first issue is the fact that the lede is only two sentences long, which is woefully insufficient for an article with this information. My second big issue with this article is that the history section has some huge information gaps. There is absolutely nothing about the inception of the center (i.e, why it was built in the first place). I'd suggest adding about why people advocated for the building of the town meeting in the first place and then add the standard information (when construction commenced and finished and when the center opened). On top of that, there is almost nothing about the late 1990s or the 2000s, times that were pretty important for the LGBT community. Some of the subsections in the Services section need an expansion too.
With that, I unfortunately am going to have to fail the article. I think the article has great potential, but it just isn't ready to be promoted quite yet. When it's ready for another round at GAN, feel free to notify me and I can either review it again or I can help ensure that it's ready to go. Best of luck with the article! Sportsguy17 (T • C) 01:10, 26 September 2017 (UTC)