Talk:Mussie/GA1
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Reviewer: PresN (talk · contribs) 18:59, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
- Reviewing this. --PresN 18:59, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
- Cute little article!
- The first paragraph is a bit sketchy on the "one or many" question- it's all written as if it's a single entity, like Nessie, which makes putting "number of individuals" as if it's a trait of a single individual read oddly.
- "who is rumored to live in Muskrat Lake" - "which", you refer to Mussie as "it" or "the creature" everywhere else, so "who is misplaced
- "Canadian pioneer Samuel de Champlain wrote about it" - that + "in the early seventeenth century"
- "fruitlessness" is a strange word to use
- Paragraph 2 of Characteristics is unclear as to how Mussie got there- I presume you mean that Muskrat Lake was once connected to the sea?
- "Robison is as follows." - colon, not period
- "independently of the truth" - independent
- Can you archive that pdf source? That doesn't seem like it will be long-term stable.
- A photo would be nice for the article - this flickr image, supposedly of Mussie, is free (CC-BY 2.0), and this one (directly discussed in the article) is not, but you may be able to ask the photographer to re-license it as CC or public domain.
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- Looks like a snapping turtle. 162.251.16.246 (talk) 07:57, 7 February 2021 (UTC)
- --PresN 19:20, 11 December 2014 (UTC)