Talk:Mycena lanuginosa/GA1

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Reviewer: Ucucha 23:28, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'm claiming the three remaining reviews; I'll fix any issues that are the same as in the three others and let you know if I see any other problems. Ucucha 23:28, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

This stays far too close to the source:

Wikipedia	Takahaski (2007)
The cheilocystidia (cystidia on the gill edge) are 40–80 by 5–15 µm, abundant, forming a sterile gill edge, fusiform, sometimes mucronate, smooth, colorless, thin-walled.	Cheilocystidia 40–80 × 5–15 μm, abundant, forming a sterile lamella edge, fusiform, sometimes mucronate, smooth, colorless, thin-walled.
The pleurocystidia (cystidia on the gill face) are 63–102 by 8–15 µm, abundant, spindle-shaped, smooth, colorless, and thin-walled.	Pleurocystidia 63–102 × 8–15 μm, abundant, fusiform, smooth, colorless, thinwalled.
Hymenophoral trama regular; element hyphae 3–25 µm wide, cylindrical, often inflated, walls thin, smooth, hyaline, dextrinoid.	Hymenophoral trama regular; element hyphae 3– 25 μm wide, cylindrical, often inflated, walls thin, smooth, hyaline, dextrinoid.
The cap cuticle is a cutis of parallel, repent hyphae that are 2–6 µm wide, cylindrical, smooth or covered with scattered, warty or finger-like diverticulae, walls thin, brownish.	Pileipellis a cutis of parallel, repent hyphae 2–6 μm wide, cylindrical, smooth or covered with scattered, warty or finger-like diverticulae, walls thin, brownish;
The underlying hyphae are parallel, hyaline or brownish, dextrinoid, with short and inflated cells up to 35 µm wide.	underlying hyphae parallel, hyaline or brownish, dextrinoid, with short and inflated cells up to 35 μm wide.
The stem cuticle is a cutis of parallel, repent hyphae 3–6 µm wide, cylindrical, smooth or covered with scattered, warty or finger-like diverticulae, colorless or brownish, inamyloid or dextrinoid, thin-walled.	Stipitipellis a cutis of parallel, repent hyphae 3–6 μm wide, cylindrical, smooth or covered with scattered, warty or finger-like diverticulae, colorless or brownish, inamyloid or dextrinoid, thin-walled;
The terminal cells (caulocystidia) are 5–9 µm wide, cylindrical, smooth or covered with scattered, warty or finger-like diverticulae, colorless, thin-walled.	terminal cells (caulocystidia) 5–9 μm wide, cylindrical, smooth or covered with scattered, warty or finger-like diverticulae, colorless, thin-walled.

The description section needs a serious rewriting. Ucucha 23:48, 8 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, sloppiness on my part. I engaged prematurely. How's it look now? Sasata (talk) 02:10, 9 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

That looks much better, but could you do the same with the other seven? They seem to have some of the same problems, though perhaps not as bad as this one. Ucucha 11:24, 9 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

All others now done. Sasata (talk) 18:25, 9 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]