Talk:Naayak/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:27, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

Will take this one as requested. Should complete this within a day or two. ☯ Jaguar ☯ 17:27, 12 February 2015 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Initial comments

• " Chota K. Naidu handled the cinematography and Gautham Raju edited the film" - little informal. How about Chota K. Naidu undertook the cinematography and Gautham Raju was chief editor (though 'chief' is something I made up, you might wanna change that)

 Done Rephrased Pavanjandhyala (talk) 03:07, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• "Siddharth Naayak kills Central Minister" - what is central minister here referring to? Can it be linked to something?

Union Council of Ministers of India. I wikilinked the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 03:07, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• " In CgTrix, Hyderabad there works a software engineer" - what is CgTrix? A fictional company?

It is a company located in Hyderabad which provides services related to Animation. I did not wikilink it as it dies not have an article on wiki. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 03:07, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

I have added a citation for the same. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:30, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• Both DGP and CBI need to be explained in the Plot section

 Done Wikilinked. Should i add a note about them? Pavanjandhyala (talk) 03:07, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• "Siddharth reaches the place after watching a MMS sent by Rawat" - watching a MMS? Surely he is reading a text message?

Multimedia Messaging Service, Images and videos can be messaged using this. Siddharth watches a video in this film through this service. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 03:07, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

For the same, i have added a citation. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:30, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• Cast section is unreferenced (I believe that it's referenced elsewhere, but this section contains no citations, a requirement for GA)

 Done Added citations. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 09:30, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• "In mid April 2012, it was reported that" - it will be favourable to drop 'mid' here, trust me!

 Done Pavanjandhyala (talk) 03:07, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

• "Later the film's release was rumored" - minor, but should this be rumoured? Please ignore if I'm wrong

 Done Rephrased Pavanjandhyala (talk) 03:07, 15 February 2015 (UTC)

References

• No dead links and no unformatted references. This makes me job a lot easier

On hold

Well done on the work you put in here. Appears very solid and is generally well written. Again, if all of the above are out of the way this should have no problem passing. I'll put this on hold for seven days. Please let me know when you have everything! ☯ Jaguar ☯ 21:58, 14 February 2015 (UTC)

Close - promoted

Thank you for your improvements made here. Now I see why MMS was used in that context - I just assumed that it's always text messaging! Thanks for pointing all of the above out. This article now meets the GA criteria, so promoting ☯ Jaguar ☯ 20:56, 15 February 2015 (UTC)