Talk:Naresh Kamboj/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 04:12, 7 April 2012 (UTC)

I took a read over this article, and I'm surprised it was nominated for GA status. Most of the article is unreferenced with only 3 refs total. There's not much sentence structure in the political career section (one huge paragraph), and I feel that finding those extra references would expand the article quite a bit as well. Beyond that the article would need a copyedit before a future nomination; I found five separate errors in the rather short lead without even trying. Article's not ready yet. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:12, 7 April 2012 (UTC)