Talk:Ndiadiane Ndiaye/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 12:27, 12 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Freedom4U (talk · contribs) 23:52, 7 September 2024 (UTC)

Will be reviewing this per discussion here. I am not finished yet so I would appreciate if you wait to act on my review. ~ F4U (talk • they/it) 06:51, 8 September 2024 (UTC)

Source review

(I used a random number generator) 2. 6. 9. 11. 14. 16. 18. 24. 27.

MOS issues

In general

• Wikilinks are very weirdly done. Several different wikilinks repeat themselves in the body (e.g. Senegal River, Lamane, Serer people, Wolof people, etc) and in some instances, the first wikilink is in the second mention of the term.

Dating

• Don't wikilink years.
• Use the circa template.

Family background

• arabo-berber affiliations definitely not the way to phrase this in English.a

Legend

• Remove the space before the comma.
• ruler of the Sine,Maad a Sinig Maysa Wali, — add a space after the comma and remove the before Sine.

Legacy

• Don't wikilink folk hero.
• Don't wikilink Senegal.

See also

• See also should be sentence case, not See Also
• This section should also be above the References section