Please add links to the characters' articles in the lead
Add how many viewers the episode had to the lead
In the end the backfired prank does impress Jim. Why is this cited? Is it a controversial comment? (I like The Office, but haven't seen this particular episode yet).
Add how Daniel Chun and Jeffrey Blitz relate to the show (are they producers, writers etc?)
Kevin Fitzpatrick of UGO Networks was a good episode, but not an especially important one which failed to advance any ongoing story lines. Word missing.
Reference 19 needs production fix ("Tvbythenumbers" should be consistent among all refs).
The article was a pleasure to read, and I truly didn't find much wrong with it. Just edit accordingly to my suggestions above, respond back on this page, and the article will be good to go. Thanks, Ruby2010talk 01:00, 15 March 2011 (UTC)
Oh, and I'm placing the article on hold for seven days (though I'm sure it will be fixed much sooner). Thanks, Ruby2010talk 01:01, 15 March 2011 (UTC)