Talk:Never Too Far/Hero Medley/GA1
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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk) 22:06, 8 July 2011 (UTC)
- By the way, two of my favorite songs from Mariah Carey. I'll try my best with reviewing, however, if not satisfy with my review. I'll simply ask for a second opinion. Good luck, AJona1992 (talk) 22:06, 8 July 2011 (UTC)
- I'm glad you enjoy them as much as me :) Sure, take your time!--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 22:20, 8 July 2011 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]- Lead
"co-written and co-produced by the former and Walter Afanasieff" - why is "former" there?
- Background and Recording
"During this period, Carey older label" - missing a letter "Carey's"
"having written the former with Jimmy Jam and Terry Lewis" - again, not sure why "former" is stated here?
- There For Me
Delink "Walter Afanasieff". Don't really need to link his name two times, we got the idea above this section.
- Composition
"In an interview with Fred Bronson, Carey described the her original feelings" - Do you want to remove "the" from this sentence?
- Live performances
"to be aired on December 21." - does this mean the special will be airing this year? If not then maybe stating "which aired on December 21 of that same year."
- Notes
I'm going to put the article On hold for further development for seven days. Good luck, AJona1992 (talk) 22:27, 8 July 2011 (UTC)
- Done all :)--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 01:03, 10 July 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for your work on this article. It has now ✓ Pass. Cheers, AJona1992 (talk) 01:33, 10 July 2011 (UTC)