Talk:New Year's Eve (Up All Night)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 19:36, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Checking against GA criteria[edit]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
You should add this template: {{DISPLAYTITLE:New Year's Eve (''Up All Night'')}} to the page so it has the proper display title

"During Reagan (Christina Applegate) and Chris's first New Year's Eve game night..." Should add who plays Chris right after his name

"Reagan's competitiveness comes out causing Chris (Will Arnett) to become embarrassed." See above comment, move it to the first mention of Chris

"Kevin (Jason Lee)..." Wiki-Link Jason Lee.

Plot, no need to wiki-link actors if they've already been wiki-linked in the intro

Plot "..she won't be to competitive..." should be "too" instead of "to"

"Reagan decides that the two need to make a list of "Things We Are Going to Stop Doing That Embarrass Each Other in 2012", which features several things for the both of them..." Reword into something like "Eva decide to a make a list of "Things We Are Going to Stop Doing That Embarrass Each Other in 2012", which features annoying habits that the two want each other to give up."

Production "Lee had previously worked with Spivey and Michaels after hosting an episode of Saturday Night Live." What year? What month?

Reception, maybe noted that Up All Night ranked third in its timeslot along with The Office, since its worded like it was the sole show during the timeslot
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
The article appears to have the same production code as the previous episode. Fix this

Use this article to cite the rating info. It's more up-to-date and includes the final viewers, which needs changing
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
Thorough coverage, no sign of trivia
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
Neural POV
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
No edit warring
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
There are no pictures. This isn't a must, but it'd be nice to get some free pictures to decorate the production section, etc. Maybe this one of Jason Lee?
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:36, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done. NoD'ohnuts (talk) 20:03, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good! I pass the article! Cheers!--Gen. Quon (talk) 20:33, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks!!! NoD'ohnuts (talk) 21:19, 22 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]