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GA Review

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Comments:

  1. Try to get a map of the route for the infobox
  2. Expand the lead by adding more descrpitive and historical information about the route
  3. "far east end" sounds awkward, try rephrasing
  4. The sentence "NY 114 is the furthest east signed north-south state route in all of New York. " sounds awkward, rephrase
  5. "ritzy" and "playground of the rich and famous"? Try using different words, the latter sounds like advertising
  6. "It quickly sheds its side street status" sounds awkward, rephrase
  7. "appropriately leads to Sag Harbor": eliminante "appropiately"
  8. The sentence "After several miles, NY 114 once again finds itself in a town, this time Sag Harbor." sounds awkward, rewrite
  9. The last two sentences in the second paragraph of the route description would fit better in the history section
  10. "route.Shelter": add space following period
  11. In next sentence, remove comma after "South Ferry Company"
  12. "turning several turns"? sounds awkward
  13. The history section of the article looks a little short, is there any additional information that can be added?
  14. Are the missing mileposts in the major intersections table known?

I am placing the article on hold Dough4872 (talk) 02:17, 2 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 17:29, 2 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
In answer to the 14th comment, I think if they were known, they wouldn't be missing. ----DanTD (talk) 17:57, 2 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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