Talk:Pandora's Tower/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 20:55, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

I'll get this done soon. JAGUAR  20:55, 27 April 2017 (UTC)

• "developed by Ganbarion for the Wii home console" - 'home console' is redundant
• "The game released in 2011 in Japan, 2012 in PAL territories, and 2013 in North America" - I think some months would be nice: The game released in May 2011 in Japan, April 2012 in PAL territories, and April 2013 in North America
• "The Chain can also be used to rip armor or material from enemies" - shouldn't 'materials' be plural?
• "Puzzles within the towers include activating levers" - 'tower' is not capitalised here, whereas it is elsewhere
• "The first stages of development began in late 2006 at Ganbarion" - this makes it sound like Ganbarion is a concrete place and not a developer
• "When Nintendo asked whether they wished to work on an original IP due to being impressed by their work" - link intellectual property
• Metacritic is not mentioned in the reception section's prose
• No dead links

Just some minor nitpicking, but other than that the article is well written and comprehensive. Definitely GA material. I'll put this on hold until all of the above are clarified. Seems quite dark for a Wii game! JAGUAR  15:47, 29 April 2017 (UTC)

@Jaguar: Dealt with all nitpicks. --ProtoDrake (talk) 16:47, 29 April 2017 (UTC)

Thanks, promoted. JAGUAR  09:35, 30 April 2017 (UTC)