Talk:Pant-hoot
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[edit]I am planning to add to this article as a part of an assignment for my Animal Behaviour course at Memorial University. Upon adding to the lead section of the article and finding reliable sources to support the claims previously given in the article, some information that I would like to add to the article include:
1. In the lead section: A description of the pant-hoot call (how it sounds, possibly how it is produced) 2. In the lead section: The 4 stages of the pant hoot call (Intro, buildup, climax, let down) 3. Heading: Social Bonding ( Affiliation) - How chimpanzees use the pant hoot to develop relationships and social connections with others. 4. Heading: Spacial communications: How chimpanzees use the pant hoot to communicate with other members of their social groups (long-distance calling). 5. Heading: Variation in the pant hoot (or modifications of the pant hoot): Including differences based upon geographic separation and differences with respect to the theory of vocal learning ( chimps modify pant hoot to be different from their neighbours). Heading: Dominance Rank: How calls vary based upon the position of dominance between male chimpanzees ( could possibly add this point to the Variation heading). 6. Heading: Human impacts on the pant hoot: chimpanzees have the ability to modify their behaviour in threatening situations (reduced pant hooting in areas with high levels of human activity.
Also, I am leaning towards the idea of instead of making a sub heading for Dominance and Human impacts, I could incorporate those into the Variation/ modification Heading. Therefore, I would have 4 sub-headings within the variation/modification heading, including: Geographic variation, Vocal learning, Dominance, and Human impacts.
- this draft is subject to change*
Some references include:
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Jump up ^ "Memorial University Libraries - Proxy Login". search-proquest-com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca. Retrieved 2018-02-11. Jump up ^ "Memorial University Libraries - Proxy Login". search-proquest-com.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca. Retrieved 2018-02-11. Jump up ^ "Contexts and social correlates of long-distance calling by male chimpanzees". Animal Behaviour. 45 (4): 735–746. 1993-04-01. doi:10.1006/anbe.1993.1088. ISSN 0003-3472. Jump up ^ "Memorial University Libraries - Proxy Login". doi:10.1111/j.1439-0310.2004.00968.x/full. Jump up ^ "Pant hoot chorusing and social bonds in male chimpanzees". Animal Behaviour. 86 (1): 189–196. 2013-07-01. doi:10.1016/j.anbehav.2013.05.010. ISSN 0003-3472. Jump up ^ Fedurek, Pawel; Zuberbühler, Klaus; Semple, Stuart (2017-11-06). "Trade-offs in the production of animal vocal sequences: insights from the structure of wild chimpanzee pant hoots". Frontiers in Zoology. 14. doi:10.1186/s12983-017-0235-8. ISSN 1742-9994. PMC 5674848 Freely accessible. PMID 29142585. Jump up ^ Roberts, Sam G. B.; Roberts, Anna I. (2016-11-24). "Social Brain Hypothesis: Vocal and Gesture Networks of Wild Chimpanzees". Frontiers in Psychology. 7. doi:10.3389/fpsyg.2016.01756. ISSN 1664-1078. PMC 5121241 Freely accessible. PMID 27933005. Jump up ^ "Memorial University Libraries - Proxy Login" (PDF). www.jstor.org.qe2a-proxy.mun.ca. Retrieved 2018-02-11.
Harandell (talk) 23:45, 11 February 2018 (UTC)
Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Harandell. Peer reviewers: Christinaelizabeth, Caitnew99.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 02:05, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer review!
[edit]Overall, I thought your article was great. You did a great job of explaining exactly what the Pant-hoot call is, however don't forget to reference your sources! Attached are some scholarly articles I have found on the Pant-hoot (call). Hope they help!
https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S000334721300211X https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1002/ajp.1350310203 http://citeseerx.ist.psu.edu/viewdoc/download?doi=10.1.1.457.1927&rep=rep1&type=pdf
Although you clearly can't provide an image of the Pant-hoot call, maybe a photo of a chimpanzee would be nice to grab the readers attention! (and they're pretty cute).
Another thing you could touch on is how the calls vary in different populations of chimps. Do chimps from different populations understand other chimps calls?
Overall great work. I hope my suggestions help! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Caitnew99 (talk • contribs) 22:15, 18 March 2018 (UTC)