Talk:Paper Rings/GA1

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 18:50, 24 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"with Big Machine." Shouldn't this be Big Machine Records?
"background vocals, programmed and" to "background vocals and programmed and"
"old-school background vocals shouting" maybe better as "old-school shouting background vocals"?
"details reminisce Swift's" to "details are reminiscent of Swift's"
Maybe add a photo of Swift or Antanoff, since the article doesn't have any photos?
The commercial use section of the NFCC template has "The use of a low resolution screenshot [...]", which doesn't really make sense for an audio clip.
Seems comprehensive enough for a song article and has all the sections I would expect.
Refs are reliable and properly-formatted.
Spot-checks: No issues except where noted.
- Schwartz, Dana (August 23, 2019). "Review: On Lover, Taylor Swift Lays Down Her Armor". Time.
  - "jangly electric guitars" Schwartz just says jangly, not guitar, and the other ref there says only guitar,, not jangly. Putting them together is synth.
- Lipshutz, Jason (August 23, 2019). "Every Song Ranked on Taylor Swift's Lover: Critic's Picks". Billboard.
  - See above.
- Leszkiewicz, Anna (July 24, 2020). "Folklore Reveals a More Introspective Side to Taylor Swift". New Statesman.
- Willman, Chris (August 23, 2019). "Album Review: Taylor Swift's Lover". Variety.
- Empire, Kitty (August 24, 2019). "Taylor Swift: Lover review – a return to past glories". The Observer.
- Petridis, Alexis (August 23, 2019). "Taylor Swift: Lover Review – Pop Dominator Wears Her Heart on Her Sleeve". The Guardian.
- "The Spinoff reviews all 18 songs on Taylor Swift's Lover". The Spinoff.
- Holmes, Dave (August 23, 2019). "When Taylor Swift Eases Up On the Self-Mythologizing, Lover Is Pretty Damn Good". Esquire.
That's all I got.

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Hello @AryKun, I have addressed all of the issues you stated :) Gained (talk) 10:56, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, will pass now. AryKun (talk) 11:11, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]