Talk:Patchway railway station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:10, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 06:10, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Well-written article. Only a few points to make: Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 16:25, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

• Description

• A note can be added on what the "chain" unit is.

  Already in note 1. -mattbuck (Talk) 16:45, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Sorry, did not notice. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

• Can CCTV camera be linked?

  I didn't link it on grounds of not liking common concepts, but ok, can do. -mattbuck (Talk) 16:45, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

As you like. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

• Services

• Great Western Railway who operate most I think "who" should be "that" and the Railway should be considered a single unit, and thus it should be said "operates".

  Sorted. -mattbuck (Talk) 17:43, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

• Several duplicate links: London Paddington, Filton Abbey Wood, South Wales Main Line, Bristol Parkway, Pilning.

  Regarding duplicate links, it's always been my opinion that there should be no duplicates within level 2 headings, but that having the same link in several sections should be ok on the grounds that people don't always read the entire article, especially when it's a long one. -mattbuck (Talk) 10:00, 29 March 2016 (UTC)

I see your point. Alright, duplinks can be kept if they are necessary. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 06:08, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

• History

• More duplinks: Bristol Temple Meads, River Severn, Pilning, South Wales Main Line, Henbury Loop Line, South Gloucestershire, Great Western Railway, Arriva CrossCountry, Manchester Piccadilly.
• and few details about it survive I think "remain" would be better than "survive"

  I'm not sure remain implies quite the same thing. I've reworded it to very little else is known about it. -mattbuck (Talk) 16:45, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Fine. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

• the gradient between Pilning and Patchway, 1 in 68 Can this be explained in simpler words?

  I'm really not sure how to be more simple than 1 in 68. -mattbuck (Talk) 16:45, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps link gradient? I am not familiar with this term here, so could not get it. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

That's done now. -mattbuck (Talk) 17:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

• What is a community mosaic?

  I've replaced community with decorative. -mattbuck (Talk) 16:45, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

Fine. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

• Future

• Duplinks:Greater Western passenger franchise, impending upgrade to the Great Western Main Line, CrossCountry

• Citations

• Lower case in ref. no.s 36 and 48.

  The capital letters are in the original documents, I thought it best to stick with the original format. -mattbuck (Talk) 16:45, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

OK. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

That should be all. These done, I would be glad to promote this. Good luck! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 16:25, 28 March 2016 (UTC)

I believe all the issues have now been addressed. This article is ready for promotion. Great job! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 06:08, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Thankyou very much! -mattbuck (Talk) 07:34, 1 April 2016 (UTC)