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GA Review

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I will be reviews this article for GA. —Mattisse (Talk) 18:16, 23 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

  • Most of the article is unsourced and fails Wikipedia:Verifiability. You have only one good source, the Washington Post article.
  • All quotations need to have a reliable source.
  • The lead is too short and is not a summary of the article per WP:LEAD.
  • There are too many quotations from the songs and reviews and not enough analysis of the topic in the article's own words. The quotes seem to make up most of the article.
  • The writing is choppy and does not flow. The article is not well written.
  • The article does not appear to be written from a NPOV.

These problems need to be fixed before the article can be considered for GA. —Mattisse (Talk) 18:29, 23 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]