Talk:Petra Kvitová/GA2

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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 07:11, 6 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Silaslej, some quick general comments:

Overall, the article is well-cited. I just added a bunch of citations to Kvitova's rankings history page on the WTA website any time her year-end ranking or in-season ranking is mentioned without another citation. I will check for other missing citations later.
The tennis guidelines require using the non-sponsored names of tournaments (often including the name of the city or country) instead of the sponsored names. For example, mentions of the "Rogers Cup" should be changed to the "Canadian Open", the "BNP Paribas Open" is just the "Indian Wells Open", and the "Mutua Madrid Open" should be just the "Madrid Open". Those are just a few examples. There are others that should be changed. You can find most of the non-sponsored names if you go to main tournament page (e.g. the Canadian Open) rather than the tournament page for a specific year (e.g. the 2019 Rogers Cup). I can help go through these if you would like. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:19, 9 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Noted, yes you can go through them yourself. Thanks again. slej (talk) 07:15, 9 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I made the following copyedits. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:38, 14 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

In 2015, Kvitová achieved the feat of making the quarterfinals at all four Grand Slams ===>>> In 2015, Kvitová achieved the feat of making the quarterfinals at all four Grand Slam tournaments during her career (clarify "during her career" instead of all four in the same year)
year-ending championships ===>>> year-end championships (terminology)
she returned to her first Grand Slam final in almost five years ===>>> she made to her first Grand Slam final in almost five years ("returned" doesn't combine well with "first")

Early life

Okay.

2006–10

singles and doubles discipline ===>>> singles and doubles disciplines (plural)
Kvitová's lone Grand Slam tournament ===>>> Kvitová's lone Grand Slam tournament appearance (clarifying)

2011

She played another ITF tournament at her home country in Prague ===>>> She played another ITF tournament at her home country in Prague that week (clarifying)

2012

Nevertheless, her run to the semifinals there saw her enact the longest winning streak of her career to date, 14 wins, that dates back to her title run in Linz last October. ===>>> Nevertheless, her run to the semifinals there saw her extend the longest winning streak of her career to date to 14 wins, dating back to her title run in Linz last October. ("enact" is not the right word)
won 3–1 in the series ===>>> won 3–1 in the tie (terminology)

2013

having never won a match at the tournament before ===>>> despite having never won a match at the tournament before (grammar)

2014

Because of this ===>>> Because of this illness (unclear what "this" is referring to)
Kvitová then loss her opening match in Rome ===>>> Kvitová then lost her opening match in Rome

2015

maiden quarterfinal of the tournament ===>>> maiden quarterfinal at the tournament ("at", not "of")
the quarterfinals of all four Grand Slams ===>>> the quarterfinals of all four Grand Slam tournaments in her career (clarifying "in her career", not during the year)
she defeated Maria Sharapova in straight sets to advance to her second final of the tournament ===>>> she defeated Maria Sharapova in straight sets to advance to her second final at the tournament ("at", not "of")
, which is also the first ever final of the tournament, since the inception of the round-robin format, ===>>> , This was also the first ever final of the tournament since the inception of the round-robin format (This can be a separate sentence. It should be past tense. And no need for the commas.)
, for the third year running. ===>>> for the third year running. (no need for the comma)

2016

In the Fed Cup opening round tie against Romania, she lost all of her singles matches. ===>>> In the Fed Cup opening round tie against Romania, she lost both of her singles matches. ("both", not "all")
Kvitová is not a top 10 seed at a Grand Slam tournament ===>>> Kvitová was not a top 10 seed at a Grand Slam tournament (past tense)
Kvitová announced that both she and coach Čermák have gone separate ways. ===>>> Kvitová announced that she and coach Čermák have gone separate ways. ("both" is not needed)
having been part of the team which took home those five crowns. ===>>> having been part of all of the teams that took home those five crowns.

2017

Kvitová began the grass court swing at the Birmingham Classic , <<<=== There is an extra space

2018

Okay.

2019

This was followed by a loss to Andrea Petkovic in the second round of the US Open, making it her first ever loss at this stage of the tournament in 12 overall appearances. <<<=== Maybe "This was followed by a loss to Andrea Petkovic in the second round of the US Open, her earliest loss at the tournament since 2011." makes more sense?
Replaced "astonishing comeback" with "big comeback"

Playing style

Okay.

Rivalries

Kvitová and "Caroline" Wozniacki
They have played each other at least once a year beginning "in" 2009.
Kvitová and "Agnieszka" Radwańska
Kvitová and "Maria" Sharapova
Kvitová and "Angelique" Kerber
Kvitová and Li "Na"

Personal life

Okay.

Endorsements

Okay.

Overall

No dab links.
All of the links work (except the WTA H2H stats, which the WTA website is in the midst of updating).
Article is sufficiently sourced.

Silaslej, I archived all of the sources to account for the WTA website recently changing their links. Also, I fixed some of the links in her early career section that were missing the "work" parameter. Overall, I think the article is in good shape and I am ready to pass it. Good work!! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 07:18, 19 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much for the comprehensive list of updates. Much appreciated. Yeah i also agree that WTA links are underway atm since the website was recently updated. Good work from your side. Looking forward to the good news soon :) slej (talk) 05:26, 20 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]