Talk:Photography in Sudan/GA2
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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 16:33, 4 March 2021 (UTC)
Happy to review this one, I'll come back in a few days.
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The first thing I have to do to ensure all the comments in the previous review have been addressed. I'll let you know when I 've done that. Amitchell125 (talk) 14:50, 5 March 2021 (UTC)
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Pause[edit]Hi Munfarid1, please could you sort out these links issues first of all? I'll check they are done in 3-4 days' time (19 March). Then i will continue to the References. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 10:28, 15 March 2021 (UTC)
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More comments to follow.
If in doubt, I consult this. I have done Refs 1 & 2 here to show what I mean by the above comments, please send me a message if I have not been clear enough, or if you want some help with this. Amitchell125 (talk) 10:34, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
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Further reading
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Contemporary photographers
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Fishing on the river Nile, by Eythar Gubara Modern schools in Sudan, by Ola Alsheikh The Challenge soccer team, by Metche Jaafar Man of the modern world by Mohamed Nureldin Abdallah, 1994 |
3.1 Digital photography: a new generation
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More to follow. Amitchell125 (talk) 09:01, 31 March 2021 (UTC) |
3.2 Commercial challenges and political expression
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2.1 Sudan Historical Photography Archive – documenting social changes
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2.2 The Golden Years of photography (1950s–1980s)
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2.3 Riefenstahl's photo books on the Nuba peoples
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More to follow. AM |
2.4 Travel photography and photojournalism
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Most of the comments below are about the prose, which needs to be copy edited to improve it.
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1.1 Earliest photographs, taken by foreigners
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1.2 George Rodger and his photo stories of the Nuba and Latuka
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More to follow. AM
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1.3 The first Sudanese photographers
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On hold
[edit]Hi, I'm placing the article on hold for a week until 13 April to allow you enough time to address the above comments. Thank you for everything you have done so far, Munfarid1. Amitchell125 (talk) 19:57, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks to you, too, for all your help and patience. I am doing this mainly to document the fascinating history of photography in Sudan, and have learned a lot about its history and the Western view through the lens and relevant publications. - Looking forward to your next remarks. Munfarid1 (talk) 18:43, 8 April 2021 (UTC)
- We're close, just a couple of points still need to be sorted. Amitchell125 (talk) 07:26, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
Passing now
[edit]Passing the article now, congratulations and thanks for all your work. Amitchell125 (talk) 18:21, 10 April 2021 (UTC)
- Thanks a lot, you also have invested a huge amount of attention, expertise and assistance into our common effort to make this article better. - I will submit it for DYK and hope, many people will read this. For anyone interested in how photographers represent and influence public awareness of this country, this should be worthwhile reading. Munfarid1 (talk) 21:27, 10 April 2021 (UTC)