Talk:Photopolymerization-based signal amplification
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(The following are peer reviews from fellow students in the class in which this was created. I don't know how these made it here, but I don't want to erase them. Apologies if these are inappropriate or confusing here. —Instructor WritingMan (talk) 21:32, 19 October 2017 (UTC))
One of the things I think is done well is the explanation about how other methods can't be performed in ambient conditions because oxygen inhibits the reaction. Another thing I liked is the quantity of references; although I haven't visited the references, I can see that some of them are scientific articles, which makes me feel that all what you are presenting is well known. Finally, I also liked how you you break the method into several steps and how you use cohesive words to link them. I also liked the images!
The article can be greatly improved by using less scientific vocabulary whenever it is possible. In this regard, I just want to add that it is more important for an article to be understandable than to be rigorous. Another more specific comment is that you should have a link to 'radical polymerization' or to its most similar term; if the method is utilizing this major technique and if there is no wikipedia article, then it could be important to explain it further. The final thing I would like you to change is to include examples of where can this method be found; I think that the article could be strengthened by making connections to something that people from outside the field can relate more.