Talk:Pied Cow Coffeehouse/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 07:03, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article. This'll prolly be my last review till sometime, as I'll be having a semester exam (I want to die). Will be back in some days after this review! GeraldWL 07:03, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for taking time to review, and good luck with your exam! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 14:15, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Another Believer, man, I didn't even remember the materials :( but thanks for the encouragement! GeraldWL 14:37, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Lead

• "The restaurant has an eclectic interior decor..." Maybe put quotations in "eclectic" to signify that it's a source stating this? Without quotations it will look like an opinion.
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:41, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
• The logo is "The Pied Cow Coffeehouse," but this article is "Pied Cow Coffeehouse." Which is right?
  • Unless sources overwhelmingly use "The", I don't think "The" is needed per Wikipedia:Naming conventions (definite or indefinite article at beginning of name). ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:41, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Description

• "illuminated by heats lamps..." Heats is plural, so maybe is it "heat lamps"?
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:43, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
• "did not serve people under the age of 21." Should we link minimum age here, since it's related?
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:43, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
• ""Anyone who grew up in Portland..." Link Portland, Oregon?
  • Nah, "Portland, Oregon" is linked in the lead, as well as the infobox, and "southeast Portland" is linked in the Description section. I think editors have an understanding of the restaurant's location by this point. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:43, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

History

• "by the Portland Street Art Alliance..." Link street art in its respective word?
  • "Street artists" links to street art right after, so I don't think the duplication is needed. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:44, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Reception

• ""pie shop/hookah bar/dispensary..." Link dispensary?
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:48, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
• "an opium den, a Casbah..." Link opium den and whatever a Casbah is?
  •  Done ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:48, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
• "each on a scale of 5." Perhaps the better way to say is "on a scale of 1 to 5." GeraldWL 14:52, 2 December 2020 (UTC)
  • I've used "on a scale of 1 to 5" in all my other Portland restaurant articles with Zagat reviews, but if you feel strongly I can change. ---Another Believer _(Talk) 23:48, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

Note: Another Believer, I will have to be inactive until 11 Dec Portland time due to (apocalypse-inducing) exams. Will look back here after it! GeraldWL 14:56, 3 December 2020 (UTC)

Overall

(1 hour before exam starts) Another Believer, this article has passed the GA criteria. GeraldWL 04:26, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

Gerald Waldo Luis, Thanks and good luck! ---Another Believer _(Talk) 04:30, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

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