Talk:Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Men Tell No Tales/GA2
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:26, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
I will be reviewing this article per a nice request from the nominator, Chompy Ace. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 00:26, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
Basic stuff and comments
[edit]- Archive all archivable sources.
- Current progress:
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good.
- First sentence in the lead seems kinda long, so...
- Add a period to finish the sentence right after "from a script by Jeff Nathanson".
- Merge "with Jerry Bruckheimer serving again as producer" to the sentence starting with "It is the sequel" so it reads "Produced by Jerry Bruckheimer, the film is the sequel..."
- With this done, change "The film stars Johnny Depp" to "It stars Johnny Depp".
@Chompy Ace: Initial comments. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 01:17, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
Plot and cast
[edit]- Plot is 623 words, so it passes WP:FILMPLOT.
- Remove the comma after "Royal Navy warship".
- Add references after everyone's role.
Done in a MCU style (example: Avengers: Infinity War) Chompy Ace 22:06, 28 December 2020 (UTC)
Other
[edit]- Couldn't find any major problems with production, release, reception, or future.
Done for all Chompy Ace 23:46, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
Done refs 79, 89, and 92 are archived via WP:ARCHIVETODAY; ref 86 removed Chompy Ace 23:46, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
- The image in #Marketing is kinda small and unnecessary, so I suggest removing it.
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- @Chompy Ace: Final notes. Ping me when you have added comments. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 23:07, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
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