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GA Review[edit]

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This article does not meet the good article criteria and has therefore failed its nomination. Issues include:

  • Insufficient references
    • "An equally ingenious popcorn making" paragraph
    • "Producers and sellers of popcorn" paragraph
    • "Popcorn will pop when freshly harvested" paragraph
    • "Two explanations exist for kernels" paragraph
    • "Air-popped popcorn is naturally high in fiber," paragraph
    • "Popcorn, threaded onto a string," paragraph
    • Several "citation needed" tags
  • References must be formatted per WP:CITE/ES to include publisher and access date
  • Lead must be expanded per WP:LEAD to at least two or more paragraphs

Once these issues have been resolved, feel free to renominate the article. Thanks! Gary King (talk) 18:10, 3 December 2008 (UTC)

  • Expanded lead, done. Rnickel (talk) 00:35, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
  • "Popcorn, threaded onto a string", done. Rnickel (talk) 00:35, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
  • "Air-popped popcorn is naturally high in fiber", done. Rnickel (talk) 00:47, 19 December 2008 (UTC)
  • "An equally ingenious popcorn making", done. Blorblowthno (talk) 19:12, 6 February 2009 (UTC)