Talk:Popeyes Chicken Sandwich

This article was the subject of an educational assignment in November 2019.

Peer Review - Audry Hernandez

Lead - Your lead for the Popeyes Chicken Sandwich is very well written and strong. With that said, be careful of any typos and punctuation (I know it's just a draft right now, but simply for future reference). In the sentence that begins with "Launching...", I think you could use another word besides "laughing" since you use the word "launch" later in the sentence. Example: "Appearing in a few locations earlier in 2019..." etc.

Nutritional Facts - I believe this section can be moved towards the bottom of the article. The main thing when it comes to the infamous chicken sandwich is the attention that it go on social media, so I would make that the main factor of the article and leave the smaller facts to the end.

Nirmeen Mandour - Peer Review

Hi Daisy, I really like how your Wiki page is coming along so far. I think that you could add more to the advertising section of it though, I know that in one of our other classes we had looked at an article/twitter page of Popeyes and I think there may be some more really good information that could be added. Other than that though, I think that your page looks really clear, concise, and straight to the point! Look forward to seeing the final page. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nirmeenmandour (talk • contribs) 03:03, 7 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review- Amanda Burke

Hi Daisy! My apologies for being so delayed in my review! I think your lead is very strong and summarizes the article well, but similarly to someone else’s review, it could absolutely use a quick proofread for some grammar/punctuation. I also think that a section on some of the news surrounding the employees and customers, as well as the stabbing victim would really add relevance and notability to the article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Amandaaliz (talk • contribs) 22:08, 19 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]