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GA Review

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Reviewer: Thurgate (talk) 23:07, 1 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    prose: (MoS):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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1. Prinz Adalbert class was a type of armored cruiser built for the Imperial German Navy in the early 1900s. Suggest - A comma after cruiser

2. Their armor belts were the same thickness but were more extensive. Suggest - A comma after thickness

3. The ships were responsive to commands from the helm. They lost up to 60 percent speed with the rudder hard over. Do you mean - While the ships were responsive to commands from the helm

4. which rendered them exceedingly wet even in a slight swell. Suggest - A comma after wet

5. These guns were provided with a total of 1,400 shells, for 140 per gun. Suggest - or 140 per gun

6. and could engage targets out to 9,090 m (29,820 ft). Suggest - allowing a maximum range of 9,090 m (29,820 ft).

I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns. Thurgate (talk) 16:58, 7 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Nice work. Passed Thurgate (talk) 18:25, 8 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]