Talk:Pure Heroine Tour/GA1
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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 12:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox
- Please add ALT text for the infobox image.
- I am not sure if the reference for the lead is necessary. References in the lead are usually reserved for controversial information, and I think that the part aobut the unreleased song should also be located and cited in the body of the article.
- Background
- Wikilink “Lorde” when you first mention her in the body of the article.
- Remember to include ALT text for all of the images in the body of the article.
- For this part (In an interview with Fuse), would it be possible to add a wikilink for “Fuse”? Is this a reference to Fuse (TV channel)?
- Development
- Everything looks good here.
- Concert synopsis
- For this part (The show was divided mainly into three parts.), I am uncertain if “mainly” is needed.
- This part (The set included three screens of video that showed Lorde and her band.) needs a citation. The same comment applies to this part (She also cites her fear of aging as inspiration.).
- For this part (was set in blue colors), maybe “shades of blue” would be better than “blue colors”.
- Reception
- Great work with this section.
- Final comments
- Wonderful work on this article. Once my comments are addressed, I will be more than happy to pass this. One day, I should really work on a tour article lol. Aoba47 (talk) 12:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- @Aoba47: Went ahead and fixed the article. Thank you so much for reviewing this! You should try to do some tour articles. I initially thought they would be a nightmare to do but they proved to be quite easy. De88 (talk) 21:32, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for addressing everything! And maybe in the future. I will ✓ Pass this though now lol. Aoba47 (talk) 21:34, 17 January 2019 (UTC)