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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:04, 16 December 2010 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria[reply]

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    This is a bit long, please break it up: Making extensive use of glass-polyester plastic construction,[2][3] the RP-77D was launched using a rocket-assisted take-off system consisting of four Loki rockets, was fitted with a radio control apparatus, and, with the assistance of radar tracking, could be operated at a considerable distance from its launching point. The conversion template defaults to British spellings, and you were mixing up Brit and American English. I fixed it by adding |sp=us to the template. I'd advise that you fix any of your other articles up for GA that have this issue.
  1. B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    Very little in the infobox is sourced in the main body. Best thing to do is to write a descriptive paragraph covering all that info w/relevant cites.
  1. B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  2. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    Do you know the designations of the engines used in the first four prototypes? What was the date of its first flight? What exact model is shown in the infobox? What's the function of the tip tanks in that picture?
  • Partially done. Found the type of Lycoming engine in the -77A/C, but nothing on what kind of McCulloch engine. Working on the rest.
  1. B. Focused:
  2. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  3. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  4. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  5. Overall:
    Pass or Fail: