Talk:Ranveer Singh/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:39, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:39, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

"But he did not get the opportunity he was seeking." this seems like a strange thing to have in the lead; i'd just remove it.
"I must say, I was a very filmi kid." do you mean filmy, as written below, or is that how the quote actually is?
"but left it for pursuing acting seriously." to pursue.. sounds better
"He decided to send his portfolio across to directors." remove across; seems randomly placed in there.
"Anupama Chopra from NDTV also gave teh film" the film
"Singh won the trophy" won the award sounds a bit better here.
A couple of the references lack titles, publishers, and/or dates, namely the first and third-last one.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 06:06, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

All done, including other fixes. Tbhotch* ^{۩ ۞} 06:27, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The article looks much better now. As all concerns are addressed, I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 06:36, 11 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]