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Reviewer: Ed! (talk · contribs) 03:06, 11 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

  • Does the image have a year?
  • "As Spain was incapable of building the España class herself" -- Why not? No shipyards or no natural resources? Might help to clarify.
  • "Armstrongs were contracted for the design and John Brown for the construction of the shipyard and ships themselves." -- The lead says Armstrongs was to build the ships. Might be easier to say in the lead that Armstrongs was supposed to design them.
  • Some of the refs are in cite book templates, others are not. Please make consistent.
  • Also, it's inconsistent as to whether you use ISBN or ASIN numbers. Please make consistent; all of these refs probably have ISBN numbers but if you can't find them you might look for OCLC instead.

Excellent! passing the article for GA. —Ed!(talk) 19:09, 16 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]