Talk:Romania in the Eurovision Song Contest 2020/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:04, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Delink China per MOS:OVERLINK
"was chosen during Selecția Națională 2020 on 1 March." - state what the Selecția Națională 2020 was for clarity
"final for the second consecutive time." - year
"while Roxen had appearances on several native talk shows and radio stations." - shorter and concise Roxen appeared on several

"Its highest placing in the contest, to this point, has been third place," - in past tense please; had
"As of December 2019, the broadcaster was still discussing the method" - the word "still" is redundant
"been given that time preceding years." - in preceding years.

"On 31 January 2020, TVR has confirmed their collaboration with native label" - the word "has" is unneeded since the event happened in the past
"Furthermore, it has been announced that Liana Stanciu" - same issue as above
"the project has costed TVR a reported €69,000." - had cost TVR
"Having brought together several notable composers such as David Ciente," - the word "notable" is unnecessary
"a songwriting camp was organized in January 2020," - organised
"Global Records's manager Ștefan has announced that a male and two female artists" - you don't need to have the word "has" since the event happened in the past
"and the competing songs released on 21 February." - competing songs were released
"released on 21 February.[14][12]" - the references should be placed in numerical order

"Selecția Națională 2020 was the national final format organized by TVR" - organised
"awarded a set of points from 5–0, which was based on each member's individual set of votes from 5–0." - both mentions of "5–0" are better off written as five to zero
"the latter was to previal in case of a tie" - latter would decide the winning song
"Selecția Națională was aired" - shown for variety

"broadcast" seemed like a better choice for me here.

"sized around 300 square metres." - the convert template should be used on the text in bold

Delink China per MOS:OVERLINK
"selected countries, except the host country" - try to not repeat the same word close together in the same sentence
"EBU soon after announced" - more gramatically correct; EBU announced soon after
"that intended 2020 entries were not eligible for the following year." - that entries intended for 2020 would not be eligible for the following year.

The video is not relevant for the information that is also presented in written form.

Will put on hold to give the nominator time to address/respond to the issues raised above. MWright96 (talk) 14:04, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thank you very much for the review. I have solved everything except for where noted. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:36, 1 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]