Talk:Ronan O'Gara/GA2
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Reviewer: Jamesx12345 (talk · contribs) 19:03, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
I'm happy to have a look at this one. Jamesx12345 19:03, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
- I've tweaked the intro to remove some redundancy, but it isn't perfect.
- The refs need to be fixed to use cite news and cite web in the correct places. Also, it looks better to use "The Independent" rather than "independent.co.uk", so I'll have a look at them.
- Scrap that, if that's the style on this page, it's consistent.
- There are a few single sentence paragraphs which could do with having the line breaks taken out.
- Fixed
- There is no playing style heading, so the kicking goes unreferenced.
- Is there any rivalry with O'Driscoll that should be discussed. I don't know much about Irish rugby, other than that both of them are extremely good and were for a time captain of Ireland.
- No I don't think so. They always played on the same team at international level and while both club teams (Munster and Leinster) were rivals, the results really came down to the two players due to them being in different positions. They are also very good friends outside of rugby so they never seemed to get in heated moments on the pitch.Tomh903 (talk) 21:21, 1 November 2013 (UTC)
Nice work! I'm happy to pass this now. Jamesx12345 18:09, 2 November 2013 (UTC)