Talk:Sézary disease

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Broken references[edit]

Citation [4] leads to a broken link/unregistered domain--could also stand for a more recent reference ("no known causes of Sezary's") as this one is from 2008 anyway --Actually, many of the references cite sezary.com, which is no longer a registered domain. Chengjason7 (talk) 05:21, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Treatment section?[edit]

Unsure if I'm reading this wrong (little knowledge of the subject), but the abstract of the cited article [11] for the first sentence of "Treatment" along with the linked articles for Vorinostat and Romidepsin don't seem to indicate that the two drugs are second-line--in fact, the article's abstract seems to indicate that HDAC inhibitors/HDI are first-line, with chemo etc being second options.Chengjason7 (talk) 05:26, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

If this is untrue, should the first-line options be also listed? The wording in the treatment section seems unclear/disorganized in general, with the last sentence being a standalone direct quote from the oncology journal the sentence cites [18] Chengjason7 (talk) 05:26, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

rewording direct quotations from citations[edit]

lots of sentences here are direct quotes from the references they cite, with [2] being the main source--this includes the first sentence of the Epidemiology section, which is also about MF and not totally relevant to the epidemiology of Sezary. Removed that sentenceChengjason7 (talk) 05:30, 9 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]